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Wednesday, 24 October 2012

Synopsis 5


Luke is standing at his slightly beaten locker, he slowly opens the door, revealing band posters and folders, he looks at his favourite poster, then Alice walks up to the locker next to him. He sees her out of the corner of his eye, she opens her locker, slowly revealing similar band posters, a smile smile appears on Luke’s face, as he scrutinizes her properly now. Her hair covers most of her face, but through the gaps in her hair, he notices small things, bright eyes, small nose, nice smile. Then quickly Alice shuts her locker and moves away.

Luke is staring blandly at the bright computer screen, lifelessly tapping away at the keyboard, watching text appear on the screen. He hits print and moves across the room, on his way he notices a group of so called ‘norms’ sitting on the bright green sofas. As he passes, they notice him and start pointing and whispering. Luke is standing by the printer and hears them but pays no attention. 
Then one of the group sits back and smugly yells; ‘Oi you fucking pussy shouldn’t you be at a hair and beauty course not here!?
He sits back, and the rest of the group burst in to fits of laughter with occasional bouts of backup insults; ‘Haha he looks like a ugly girl!’, ‘Where are your boobs woman? Late bloomer?’, ‘Why aren’t you defending yourself?’ ‘Proof he has a pussy!’ 

Luke just shakes his head, and strides back past the group back to his seat, the group die down and returns to their chat.

A few seconds later Alice enters the room. She still has her head down and headphones in, muttering to herself incoherently under her breath. The group look round and notice Alice, they instantly crack up in to laughter, then one of the group, grabs a sandwich that was sitting next to him and throws it straight at Alice.
A thwomp shakes Alice’s world, as the sandwich hits her squarely in the face. Alice is shocked and startled, as the sandwich drops to the floor. She shuffles across the room briskly, with short strides carrying her to a seat by a computer in the corner of the room. She sits down at speed, placing her bags gently on the table, and creating a wall between herself and the group.

The group move slowly around to the computers near her continuing the abuse, with any object near them such as food, pens, crumpled bits of paper and combined with verbal abuse. 

Luke pulls out his phone from his pocket, whilst looking down at his screen and up at what is happening to Alice. His fingers move furiously across the keyboard of the phone, and then he suddenly pockets the phone.

He gets up out of his seat, moves across the room, pushes past the group members and grabs Alice by the arm and leads her out the room silently. The group follow them, jeering with the same recycled insults, until they get outside in to the piazza, where Luke and Alice  stop and turn around to face the group. The insults stop and it drops in to silence. Then Luke just casually pulls his phone out of his pocket, presses a large button, and holds the camera up at eye level. The group stare on confused, for a second, when out of the bushes and out from behind walls jump out loads of people, all with food in hand. The group look around noticing they have been boxed in when Luke says ’Go’. 

Monday, 22 October 2012

Synopsis Evaluation

-Explain the:
· world
· character
· problem

The world for my short has been set in the Sixth Form college area of a secondary school based in Banstead, a mainly middle class area. The main protagonist in my story is called Luke, and he is 17 years of age, starting his second year in the Sixth Form. He is part of the metalhead culture, with long hair, dark t-shirts and jeans as his constant form of dress. His problem is the bullying and abuse his culture and its respective sub-cultures receive.


-Does the story encompass a single moment/event? Describe it.

It encompasses around the event where the main character Luke is being bullied by the antagonist group, taking insults at his personal image, but when he ignores them, they ignore him. That’s the point in time where Alice enters, which allows for the secondary stage of bullying to occur which starts to bother Luke. Until the point where he intervenes.



-The most successful shorts are those that deal with a single event (unity of action), take place in one location (unity of place) and happen within an unbroken continuum of time (unity of time). How far does your story conform to the unity of time, place and action?
My short conforms to the unity of place due to the fact it is held within a sixth form, except for the final scene which is situated just outside of the sixth form centre. It also conforms slightly to the unity of time due to it all happening in one continuous time frame there aren’t any specific jumps in time apart from the cut between the locker scene and the computer scene with Luke. They are minor jumps which really don't effect the time because the two different scenes at the beginning and end of the short 'bookends' the main time frame, but it works because every scene is close enough in time to not disrupt the unity. It also conforms with unity of action because it revolves around the one ‘bullying’ scene and then shows it’s consequences.


-From whose POV is the story told? Is this clear? How?


The POV is shown from the main character, Luke’s perspective, this is clear because it is all been written for his POV, plus he is the one who takes action, which reinforces the fact that it is from his POV.


-Explain what motivates your protagonist.

The motivation for my protagonist, is the motion for change and equal treatment. Not just to be judged on the way you look, style yourself or what you’re in to.


-Is the main problem the heart of the film? Explain.

The main problem of the film, the victimisation, or bullying of a certain style or culture, has been made the heart of the film. Seeing as the main bulk of this short is based around the main problem of bullying.


-How successfully have you set up a predicament for your main character which presents them with a choice between two equally difficult paths (the dilemma)?

The dilemma has been set up in a way that the protagonist has been put through the situation himself, but then when he is sitting there, watching it happen to someone like him, he has the choice of saving his own skin or in other words making his life worse for himself or actually intervening and helping Alice out.


-Is there a sense of internal or external conflict for you protagonist (often emanating from the predicament) and is it credibly developed?

I think personally that I have tried to include both within my short for the protagonist in the way that he has internal conflict in the way that he feels he should help Alice on principle, but he also has external conflict fighting his principles to act in the way that if he gets involved in the current conflict physically, it is the human nature response of fight or flight, if he stays and 'fights', he will possibly make his own life worse, where as if he 'flies' and doesn't intervene he is giving the antagonists more power.


-What use is being made of:
· familiar settings
· familiar rituals

It uses a familiar setting in the way that it is set in a sixth form college common room, a familiar setting for the teenage audience, Plus it also makes use of familiar rituals in the way that sitting down chatting with friends and sitting and doing your work is a familiar ritual, plus as teens we are very used to seeing bullying, because at one point in our lives we have seen or been the victim of bullying.


-Are the stakes high enough? Explain.

The stakes are high enough in the way that he has a lot on the line with his social reputation, but he has a lot on the line morally in the way that it is against his way of being if he doesn’t intervene. Furthermore they are also high enough with Alice in the fact that she has been physically and emotionally abused by this group, and it seems like nothing is stopping it.


-Is there at least one clear meaning that the audience can take away? What is it?

One clear meaning the audience can take away from the film, is the effect that bullying and victimisation has on a teen, but also how one thing can change everything. Moreover that people have to take a stand, which is easier as a unified group.

-Is the film achievable on a zero budget?

Yes, the film is achievable due to the fact i have a ready made location, free for use, i have all the required equipment at my disposal, freely available, plus i have untrained actors who i can also recruit free of charge.

Synopsis 4


Luke is standing at his slightly beaten locker, he slowly opens the door, revealing band posters and folders, he looks at his favourite poster, then Alice walks up to the locker next to him. He sees her out of the corner of his eye, she opens her locker, slowly revealing similar band posters, a smile smile appears on Luke’s face, as he scrutinizes her properly now. Her hair covers most of her face, but through the gaps in her hair, he notices small things, bright eyes, small nose, nice smile. Then quickly Alice shuts her locker and moves away.

Luke is staring blandly at the bright computer screen, lifelessly tapping away at the keyboard, watching text appear on the screen. He hits print and moves across the room, on his way he notices a group of so called ‘norms’ sitting on the bright green sofas. As he passes, they notice him and start pointing and whispering. Luke is standing by the printer and hears them but pays no attention. 
Then one of the group sits back and smugly yells; ‘Oi you fucking pussy shouldn’t you be at a hair and beauty course not here!?
He sits back, and the rest of the group burst in to fits of laughter with occasional bouts of backup insults; ‘Haha he looks like a ugly girl!’, ‘Where are your boobs woman? Late bloomer?’, ‘Why aren’t you defending yourself?’ ‘Proof he has a pussy!’ 

Luke just shakes his head, and strides back past the group back to his seat, the group die down and returns to their chat.

A few seconds later Alice enters the room. She still has her head down and headphones in, muttering to herself incoherently under her breath. The group look round and notice Alice, they instantly crack up in to laughter, then one of the group, grabs a sandwich that was sitting next to him and throws it straight at Alice.
A slight thwomp resonates around the room as the sandwich hits Alice squarely in the face. Alice is shocked and startled, as the sandwich drops to the floor. She shuffles across the room briskly, with short strides carrying her to a seat by a computer in the corner of the room. She sits down at speed, placing her bags gently on the table, and creating a wall between herself and the group.

The group move slowly around to the computers near her continuing the abuse, with any object near them such as food, pens, crumpled bits of paper and combined with verbal abuse. 

Luke pulls out his phone from his pocket, whilst looking down at his screen and up at what is happening to Alice. His fingers move furiously across the keyboard of the phone, and then he suddenly pockets the phone.

He gets up out of his seat, moves across the room, pushes past the group members and grabs Alice by the arm and leads her out the room silently. The group follow them, jeering with the same recycled insults, until they get outside in to the piazza, where Luke and Alice  stop and turn around to face the group. The insults stop and it drops in to silence. Then Luke just raises his hand and clicks his fingers, the group stare on confused, for a second, when out of the bushes and out from behind walls jump out loads of people, all with food in hand. The group look around noticing they have been boxed in when Luke says ’Go’. Suddenly all the people with food, pelt the group with it, leaving Luke and Alice to stand on and watch silently. Alice moves her hand to hold Luke’s and he grips back tightly.

Synopsis Draft 3 + Discussion Notes


Synopsis 3

Luke is standing at his slightly beaten locker, he slowly opens the door, revealing band posters and folders, he looks at his favourite poster, then Alice walks up to the locker next to him. He sees her out of the corner of his eye, she opens her locker, slowly revealing similar band posters, a smile smile appears on Luke’s face, as he scrutinizes her properly now. Her hair covers most of her face, but through the gaps in her hair, he notices small things, bright eyes, small nose, nice smile. Then quickly Alice shuts her locker and moves away.

Luke is staring blandly at the bright computer screen, lifelessly tapping away at the keyboard, watching text appear on the screen. He hits print and moves across the room, on his way he notices a group of so called ‘norms’ sitting on the bright green sofas. As he passes, they notice him and start pointing and whispering. Luke is standing by the printer and hears them but pays no attention. 
Then one of the group sits back and smugly yells; ‘Oi you fucking pussy shouldn’t you be at a hair and beauty course not here!?
He sits back, and the rest of the group burst in to fits of laughter with occasional bouts of backup insults; ‘Haha he looks like a ugly girl!’, ‘Where are your boobs woman? Late bloomer?’, ‘Why aren’t you defending yourself?’ ‘Proof he has a pussy!’ 

Luke just shakes his head, and strides back past the group back to his seat, the group die down and returns to their chat.

A few seconds later Alice enters the room. She still has her head down and headphones in, muttering to herself incoherently under her breath. The group look round and notice Alice, they instantly crack up in to laughter, then one of the group, grabs a sandwich that was sitting next to him and throws it straight at Alice.
A slight thwomp resonates around the room as the sandwich hits Alice squarely in the face. Alice is shocked and startled, as the sandwich drops to the floor. She shuffles across the room briskly, with short strides carrying her to a seat by a computer in the corner of the room. She sits down at speed, placing her bags gently on the table, and creating a wall between herself and the group.

The group move slowly around to the computers near her continuing the abuse, with any object near them such as food, pens, crumpled bits of paper and combined with verbal abuse. 

Luke continues watching this abuse from his seat, fidgeting and wanting to move. The alpha male of the group yells out at Alice; ‘Why don’t you go and kill yourself and be done with it! You emos drive me insane!’ Luke’s eyes light up at this and he grabs a penknife from his bag and strides meaningfully towards the alpha. ‘Is this what you fucking want to see?!’ As he drags the knife down his arm, drawing blood. Before the alpha can say anything or move to react Luke slams his bloodied arm up against the alphas throat, and holds out his hand to Alice.

Alice, now in even more shock, slowly takes Luke’s hand. He pulls her gently and leads her out of the room.




Discussion Notes

From the second draft to this draft the beginning had to be changed to adequately fit my characters in and to establish a link for these characters. Milgrom’s point that applies here is that; ‘Each scene needs to move the story forward.’ which to an extent this new beginning does, purely for the fact that it creates and establishes that there will be a link between these two characters later on. 

Plus with the action in the second draft to this it has been toned down slightly but it’s still too much action for it to be believable, which relates to another point Milgrom made where she said; ‘Audiences instinctively know when something is pretentious or dishonest.’ 

Furthermore there’s the fact where i am still not happy with the ending because i personally believe that it is ‘cheesy’ and has been overused by previous texts across multiple genres, so i would like to rework the ending to fit mine better, once again relating to Milgrom's point about the audience instinctively knowing 'when something being pretentious or dishonest'.

Sunday, 14 October 2012

Comparitive Analysis of 5 Short Texts


Many short films by directors such as; Brian Percival, Alicia Duffy, Simon Ellis, Tom Harper and Jane Linfoot all have common traits between their shorts. These being the themes and issues that run throughout them.

Take for example; ‘The Most Beautiful Man in the World’. One of the main themes and issues that run through the whole of the short is the sexualisation of young children; this shows to us the viewer the representations involved are sexuality and age mainly.

Alicia Duffy shows this to us in the opening scene of her short through the use of a fade in which makes the audience feel in a sleepy relaxed state of mind, likewise with the child shown on screen, but in a few seconds this comfort is shattered and immediately dropped in to an awkward, morbid curiosity due to her choice to use a slow pan and tilt up a scantily clad, young girl, wearing skimpy shorts and an almost tube top like shirt revealing a bare midriff. This camera movement along with a canted angle makes the viewing extremely uncomfortable and almost voyeuristic in its style. This whole scene is yet again reinforced by the use of character codes due to the actress stretching with an arched back whilst yawning but because the movement has been slowed down, it makes the scene overly sexualized. Then Duffy had the idea of linking all of this with her make up design. Young girls with make up generally connotes a sexualized girl and the make up used on the young girl within this scene is subtle but really effective due to the use of a make up that makes her have a waxy skin tone, which also brings out her bright red lips, which is a connotation of sex.

This links to Brian Percival’s short, About a Girl, with its theme and issue of sexualisation of young children but in a different way. Due to the fact that in the short the main character, a young girl of 13 years of age, is represented as young girl with aspirations of growing up to be a popstar with her friends but this is juxtaposed with the final scene of her dropping a fully grown baby fetus in to a canal, being the so called ‘sting in the tail’ that many shorts finish upon. This shows us the viewer that the main themes and issues that run throughout the short are growing up and maturing, plus the sexualisation of young children. Furthermore this also shows us the representations in the film being sexuality and age, pretty much the same as ‘The Most Beautiful Man in the World’ but with subtle differences.

Brian Percival shows this to us in one of the final scenes of his short where the young girl is walking through a dilapidated housing estate, full of graffiti and forgotten about rubbish, making it seem like a war zone. This shows us her class and status of a poor background, while all the time spouting diegetic monosyllabic dialogue, which shows the simplicity of her education, whilst walking along side a long thin canal. Milgrom states that it is important for an emotional journey to be shown through a physical journey, which in this short, is the canal. Then there is the use of more diegetic sound of rushing water, which sets the tone of an uneasy calm, paired with the use of an upwards tilt which gives of a brooding feel to the audience at first but when it comes to rest at a high angle it shows the reality of the situation, where the young girl is a now represented as she is, a child. Then as she drops the prop of the bag in to the canal, we fully realize the extent to which she has been sexualized and how she has grown up. The white bag, which could possibly connote innocence is shown opening and out of as it continually sinks, is a fully grown baby fetus, covered in bright red blood. The use of the colour palette here shows how her innocence has been destroyed and how she has grown mentally but not physically and that she has been sexualized in the way that she has actually got an aborted child, but at the same time it also shows the lack of education because she has gotten pregnant and then decided to dispose of it within the local canal.

Moving on, this could link to Simon Ellis’s short, ‘Soft’, due to the fact that in ‘Soft’, its major themes and issues revolve around growing up along with nature and nurture. But the growing up theme is completely different in the way it’s shown when compared to ‘About a Girl’ due to the fact it is about how teenagers grow up and the problems they face when growing up, plus the nature/nurture side of its theme is about how he is being nurtured the wrong way by his father, where as his nature is telling him to defend himself. This links with representation because it shows to us the viewer the representations of age, gender and class and status.

Simon Ellis shows this to us the viewer in one of the final scenes in the short, where a group of stereotypical ‘yobs’ are being shown outside a middle class, English house showing us the class and status of the area, this is shown to us through the use of the mise en scene, with the group wearing the stereotypical outfit of antisocial youths, in baggy tracksuits or jogging wear, paired with baseball caps or bandanas, plus the house is shown to us as being in a pretty, clean, quiet neighbourhood. The group then progress to aggravate the father and son within the house, again with the mise en scene showing us with the use of props that are rather expensive dotted around the house. The tension is shown between the father and son when they begin arguing, constantly raising their respective voices, showing the scene as getting more tense, as if it’s building up to something. This links to Milgrom as she said each scene has to reveal something in the next to push the story forward, which it does effectively due to the fact it shows us that despite the father’s diegetic dialogue of constantly telling the son to; ‘sit back down’ he’s trying to nurture his son but not effectively because it’s a representation of ‘do as I say, not as I do’. But as the scene progresses the use of mid shots and close ups on the father and the group show the fathers fear and the groups confidence, which Goffman made a point about that we present ourselves differently for different people, so he is trying to act like the protective father figure in front of his son. Percival’s use of the quick cross cutting between the two situations of outside and indoors, shows the two worlds are completely different and this helps to build tension for the viewer until the father breaks the divide and goes outside to confront the group and proceeds to get beaten up shown in cuts of close ups, interchanged between the main antagonist and the father. Until the son comes out and proceeds to beat up the group with a cricket bat, the prop of the weapon plus the close up of the enraged facial expression character code, shows how the sons nature has taken over; which shows how he has let his nature, nurture his way of being.

Fourthly, this could link with Tom Harper’s short; ‘Cubs’. This is due to the themes and issues of nature and nurture along with growing up being present in this short, akin with ‘Soft’. But yet again Harper has chosen a different way of representing these themes and issues. He chose to show that for nature and nurture both his environment and his peers are pushing him in the wrong direction and that he growing up in the wrong way; due to the fact that they are pushing him to kill a fox.

Tom Harper shows this to us in one of the scenes near the end of his short, where the main protagonist is out in an old worn football pitch made from concrete, that has been well used and is in a poorer part of London, due to the surrounding mise en scene being dead trees, high rise flats and the different types of graffiti everywhere, but the colour palette is dark due to the night setting, but the scene is pierced with one bright light emitting from behind him, coming from a street lamp. Then it cuts to a low angle, worm’s eye view shot from the foxes point of view, where the rest of the group are revealed to us, egging him on to kill the fox with the gun handed to him by the ‘alpha male’ of the group. The diegetic chant of the whole group telling him to kill it shows the wrong type of nurturing for him to grow in to, but you can see the main character is conflicted because it keeps using cross cutting to show the group, the fox and the protagonists face, but it’s in the close up we can see the anguish in his eyes, but eventually he is pressured in to shooting the fox. As it zooms out to show him standing, in a group but the way he just stands shows to us the viewer through character codes that he feels solitary until, the ‘alpha male’ wipes blood on his face from the fox, and in diegetic dialogue says; ‘You’re one of us now’, almost as if it was like an admission test to grow through slightly like a Jewish barmitzah otherwise known as a rite of passage.

This could be then linked to Jane Linfoot’s short; ‘Youth’, due to the fact that the short is about young teens growing up and nature vs. nurture. The film itself is three different stories in one short, but I am focusing on one of these short stories, the last one focusing on the three school kids on the back of a public bus.

The scene opens with a blatently handheld camera movement as the three teens run up the stairs of an old style bus, shown by the mise en scene of a brown colour palette and plain metal railings. The handheld movement was selected by Linfoot because it allows us the viewer to see it from one of the character’s point of views and therefore relate to the story. Milgrom stated in one of her scriptwriting articles that you should set your short around a familiar event or ritual so considering a bus journey is a regular thing, this also allows the audience to relate to the situation.
Later on in the scene it cuts from a mid shot, to a close up of one of the teens playing with a flick knife. The slow close up used shows the teenage stereotype of knife crime, which shows that he isn’t being nurtured very well but his nature is conflicting with him just cause he is carving in to the back of a bus seat.
The constant use of mid-shots, for one character shows him as the alpha male, a common connotation of groups of teens to have a leader of sorts. This alpha male role is reinforced in the next scene when the diegetic raised dialogue of an argument between the alpha male and one of the group kicks off and then dies down. Furthermore the use of a focus pull shows that the third member of the group, doesn’t want to get involved.
Furthermore a scene later on has a long take of a group of girls getting on the bus and sitting down, which then cuts to a mid-shot of the alpha male using the character codes such as staring and having his mouth slightly open to show that he is interested in the girls. Moving on from this scene another argument breaks out between the alpha male and a member of the public, and the use of close ups, shows the aggravated situation, with a teen bothering a member of the public, which is another common social stereotype, which builds tension for the viewer. But the tension dies back down, when the alpha male throws an empty drinks can at the member of the public but then uses diegetic dialogue to blame it on one of the lesser ‘ranking’ teens. These are all common stereotypes of growing up but they relate back to nature vs nurture because none of the group are being nurtured properly they are being left to their own devices, like in other shorts such as; ‘The Most Beautiful Man in the World’, ‘About a Girl’ and ‘Cubs’.

In conclusion, i have found that shorts can share many of the same traits such as themes and issues, representations, but at the same time the way they represent these traits is perfectly individual to the short itself.

Thursday, 11 October 2012

Synopsis Draft 2 and Discussion Notes


Luke is sitting at his worn, scribbled upon desk, twiddling his pen between his fingers, watching the clock run down the minutes. As the bell rings, he picks up his stuff and quickly shuffles out of the room on his own, leaving the rest of the class to chat and casually stroll out.
Luke is staring blandly at the bright computer screen, while lifelessly tapping away at the keyboard, doing his work, when he hears insults yelled through the tranquil room. He turns to see Alice, a quiet, introvert metalhead, being verbally attacked by a group of the so called ‘norms’. Intently he watches this abuse, while the group wheel her across the room and in to a corner on the complete opposite side of the room, he watches Alice as the group stroll back out of his line of sight, still jeering. Alice just remains, quiet, unmoving like a statue. Slowly she moves to get something out of her bag, the group start to crack more jokes when they realise that it’s blade from a sharpener. Luke listens, then grabs something out from his bag and moves towards the group. The group takes one look and laughs and questions what he wants. Luke simply raises raises one arm and runs a blade down his arm, drawing blood, that starts to run down his arm. The group are left in shock, that’s when Luke shifts his footing quickly so his bloodied arm is holding up the leader of the group by the throat against a wall. The rest of the group don’t want anything to do with it, so they bolt, leaving the leader to fend for himself.
Luke slowly runs his arm across the leader’s throat, leaving bloodstains against his neck and drops him from against the wall, goes to pick up his stuff, leaving the leader in a state of shock on the floor.

Discussion Notes

From the discussion, we decided that the predicament, dilemma, conflict and tension, is now present within the story but the story is now too over the top, it could become comical or not true to life, which relates to Milgrom's point about 'Are the stakes high enough?' in the way that in this, yes the stakes are high, but they are too high. This also relates to her point about audiences, in the way that they 'instinctively know when something is being pretentious or dishonest'.

Also we decided that the start doesn’t fit with the rest of the story and doesn’t establish the link between Luke and Alice which places a major plot hole in the unity and time of action element of the story, because his actions in the conflict aren’t justified by the beginning of the story, which relates back to Milgrom in the form of her ten point plan, that states that each scene should drive the piece forward, which this scene didn't.

Plus It was suggested that i quietly and gently introduce the link between Luke and Alice, which could also gently introduce the issue of self harm, but the main point from our discussion was that i need to make Luke more motivated before he gets involved in any conflict. From this we discussed changing the beginning interior room from a classroom to a set of lockers, so that we can establish a link that the character Luke can identify with so there is a link with Alice, through what’s in her locker and through proximity, because he can notice that she is attractive through all the mise en scene of her costume and make up, this was a useful idea because it was backed up with one of Milgrom's screenwriting conventions, in the form of telling the story with camera and as minimal dialogue as possible.

Synopsis Draft 1 and Discussion Notes


The Short opens in a classroom at the end of a school day, with the main ‘metalhead’ character sitting as his desk, twiddling his pen, watching the clock run down the minutes. Then as the bell rings he picks up his stuff and quickly shuffles out of the room on his own, leaving the rest of the class to chat and casually walk out.
It then cuts to a different scene of a sixth form common room, where the main character is sat at a computer with headphones over his ears doing his work. Then his isolation is shown by him being alone at a computer, when the rest of the sixth form are in their own social groups. Suddenly he is hit by a flying object, and a barrage of laughter, so he just packs up his stuff and leaves, and walks home.
When at home he walks up to his room and throws his stuff down to the floor. He then walks past a mirror but stops and turns to look at himself. He starts pulling his clothes whilst looking uneasy and torn. Then he opens the wardrobe and pulls out the supposedly ‘normal’ clothes that he owns. After putting on the clothes he turns and looks in the mirror again. Then he screams and changes back in to his previous outfit and looks in the mirror and smiles.
For the rest of the day he smiles, through dinner, television, school work and when he goes to sleep.
Then it opens with the same opening scene but the next day, and as he gets up to go home he hears the jibes and jeering of the supposedly ‘normal’ group, he slowly turns and says; ‘I am what, i am’, turns, and walks out of the room smiling and then it ends.


Discussion Notes

The main point that came up in our discussion was the issue of “literary” style versus WYSIWYG - What You See Is What You Get. It runs through the description, it’s more novel style than film style writing. Take for example; ‘At the end of the school day’. We can’t see this is the frame. So many parts need to be removed from this and changed or edited to make this seem more like a description of a film.
Also we spoke about how i could be more descriptive of the actual settings around, which goes along with the WYSIWYG point made earlier because at the moment it’s too basic.

Another major point that was brought up during the discussion was the fact that the story itself is too tame and doesn’t really have a peaking point for the dilemma part of the story. Which in turn makes the predicament and conflict parts of the synopsis weak too. Overall the whole synopsis for now is not following The Character and the Problem questions set out by Milgrom such as; Who is the main character? What is their problem? How will the audience recognise the problem? Are the stakes high enough? Am I telling the story from the best point of view? Which in turn makes it worse for the audience because; 'The audience must be clear from the outset who the film is about and they won’t be if you aren’t.'

Tuesday, 9 October 2012

Short Film context - Part 6

Short Film Context - Part 3

Short Film Context - Part 8


The Short Film Context Part 8

Distribution and Exhibition

I think that the difference between shorts making money conventional and those that don’t is diminutive for a good reason. That being I believe that the market for people buying shorts is incredibly small, for one thing most of the time shorts are viewed by a very niche market anyway at film festivals or independent cinemas but most people in the industry know shorts as a breakthrough piece it wasn’t made to make money itself, it was created to open the door to make another piece that will make more money.

Cinema 16 collected it’s shorts according to country or area of the world it was released in, The BFI collected their shorts together for an educational purpose, where as future shorts don’t have a collection they just distribute their films to other companies who put together these anthologies. Furthermore Raindance is selling two DVDs a film they screened that was acclaimed at the festival but never gained a deal because of it’s tense subject matter of child abduction so they are now retailing it plus they are also selling an anthology of their best films from the 16th Raindance festival for entertainment which is the same as shooting people who have two anthology videos online of the world’s most major award winning films of their respective years.

So some shorts have been collected for entertainment and some have been collected for educational purposes.

It is possible to find other short anthologies but they are mainly animation based plus they are very difficult to locate because they have only been advertised in specialist magazines or specialist sites so yet again it’s a very niche market.

For example I found a collection of 30 shorts from stash magazine, but they mainly focus on animations and visual effects: http://www.stashmedia.tv/collections/SF1.htm

Short Film Context - Part 7

Short Film Context - Part 5

The short film context part 5 Online Screening Video Blog post format Online screening is a large part of a shorts life because yet again it’s another audience for them to tap in to. It’s incredibly useful for them to gain some free or relatively cheap exposure. For example most sites that screen shorts online such as BBC, Film4, Virgin Media, FutureShorts and Lovefilm to say a few, all stream their films and they tend to cater to lots of different needs. They have multiple genres such as; drama, animation, documentary, comedy, thriller and many more but they have an ultimate range to choose from and they are all mainly uploaded or sent in for free by the creator or the creator pays a small fee for it to be hosted and shown. This means that the creator has to establish a connection between them and their chosen exhibitor. This relationship can be established in many different ways, such as free hosting on youtube, or paid for hosting or submitted it to a competition; they have developed a working relationship. Then there’s the whole actual online audience, which could range from anyone at any age, although it would mainly be late teens upward so it would include students studying film and then film fans and occasionally some critics and persons of the film industry if a film garners enough ‘buzz’, granted some films or services may require a payment, for example filmmakers uploading whole films to youtube can charge a fee to watch it, and lovefilm and other services charge a subscription fee monthly. To actually get these films on their sites is rather easy, but the catch is you have to actually have a good film, that meets all their criteria and gets in before their deadlines and obviously pay any fees if required to. Although you must be picky about which site to upload to, like some sites have moderation which is put in to help you, like BBC recommends that you don’t upload before trying film festivals first, where as some sites just accept it if it meets their criteria, without thinking about where your film could go before their site. When these sorts of sites offer shorts against features, it is implying that they have a choice, and that this short could be considered up in the ranks with that specific feature, plus it gets them more exposure because they use scripts such as ‘related videos’ so if a short is related to the feature they will tend to watch the same sort of thing they are interested in. Overall the layout of all these sites tends to be exactly the same, with a tabs bar taking you to different pages, a drop down menus, and all the shorts having screenshots as their picture/poster, but it is effective in the way that they are easy and simple, which means accessibility and location is easily available for the viewer. Which helps the audience potential because they can easily pinpoint what they like dislike and access what they want to, plus the exposure is unlimited, I mean the internet has pages alive for years so these films will be accessible for many, many years.

Short Film Context - Part 4

Short Film Context - Part 2

The Short Film Context – Part 2

Funding and Support

The UKFC was a non-departmental body run outside the government and mainly by public sectors. It was set up in 2000 by the Labour government to promote the UK film industry. To support short filmmakers and short filmmaking, it had three direct funding opportunities that people could apply for them being: Development Fund – To broaden the quality, range and ambition of film projects being developed in the UK. It had 12 million in lottery funding in which to help filmmakers of all experience levels develop their ideas and screenplays into viable feature films, be they fiction, documentary or animation, up until the moment they were ready to get production finance. New Cinema Fund - Supported emerging talent and established filmmakers working outside the mainstream, focusing on the most innovative writing and the most gifted directors. The fund had £15 million of Lottery money to invest over three years and funded eight to ten feature films each year. It had a strong commitment to supporting work from the nations and regions, from black, Asian and other minority ethnic filmmakers and encouraged the use of digital technology in the production, distribution and exhibition of films. Premiere Fund - Invested £8 million of Lottery funding per year into mainstream, commercially-driven films encouraging the involvement of British creative talent in a range of films to attract audiences the world over. The position and role of the BFI prior to the creation of the Film Council, was that it should concentrate on developing the appreciation of filmic art, rather than creating film itself. Thus control of educational film production passed to the National Committee for Visual Aids in Education and the British Film Academy assumed control for promoting production. The role and position of the BFI has changed since it took over the job of the UKFC since it was shut down by the government, it’s current role and position, is to still keep records of British TV and film in archival records but it took over the main role of the UKFC to distribute funding to filmmakers. The UKFC still continues to exit but not as a separate body but a merged one, it still lives on as a department within the BFI where it still can focus on it’s previous jobs such as supporting schools, and the education of film. The Regional Screen Agencies that Film Council funding was delivered through are 9 regional agencies divided up over the United Kingdom that help and provide funding for the filmmakers specifically located in their constituency, this is why their roles are incredibly complex and span multiple elements, such as pin pointing the specific cultural, economic and social objectives. Funding for shorts, is handled by the BFI in a way that anyone can apply for funding with an application form they can fill out online but there is no specific guarantee of funding being granted. Funding for short films has changed since the power structure of national film agencies changed in very early January of 2012 where the BFI decided to hand over the handling of the distribution of funds to Lighthouse a Brighton based arts company. As a short film maker I could apply for the BFI/Lighthouse short film fund, I could also apply to the RSA for my region being Screen South, I could also apply Local council or a charity depending on what the theme of the short was. Plus I can also apply for funding if being in a production scheme or a competition, or even if I needed some funding to have full completion of a short.